Jemiba said:
I've added the panel lines visible in the CGI and the colour scheme from post #69
(Thank you Flateric, thank you Paul !). The latter certainly not for number crunchers ...
I’ve been admiring your drawings, Jembiba. Great work!
However, I think that you’ve fallen into the trap of improving on reality, and of making the Tempest look as though it had been designed with an eye to aesthetics, and because of that I think that you have missed some of the odd proportions of the aircraft. I hope you’ll take the following observations in the spirit in which they are intended.
Front view:
The canopy seems too wide or the forward fuselage is too narrow. There’s more distance between the edge of the LERX/Chine and the edge of the canopy, and it ‘bulges’ downwards more with heftier ‘shoulders’.
The intakes slope inwards less steeply.
I think that the main wheels should be thinner/narrower, and the wheel track seems narrower than you have drawn.
The lower forward fuselage is narrower than the upper part, and is more U-shaped than you seem to have shown. From below the aircraft has a really pronounced LERX.
The nose gear doors are further apart and ‘toe’ inwards when open.
I think the whole fuselage should be broader and ‘flatter’ over more of its surface.
The tailfins seem too canted, and too close together at the roots.
The nosewheels seem too small. This is a Tornado undercarriage, so the nosewheels should not be that much smaller than the main wheels.
Comparing the drawing with a good Tornado drawing would be interesting – I wonder if the wheelbase/track is the same? I wonder whether it would give a different impression of the aircraft’s overall size?
Side view:
The nose gear doors are more sharply pointed than your drawing shows, I think.
The main gear doors look a little small.
I think that the tail sting looks a little ‘fat’ and ‘droopy’?
Plan view:
I think that the fuselage is too narrow and perhaps too ‘small’. If you look at how far apart the engines are, and then look at how much ‘fatter’ the exhausts are than the engines themselves, it starts to explain how there could be a significant weapons bay between them, and why the top of the fuselage looks so much like a tennis court!
I’m not sure about the six ‘staggered’ square panels on the drawing – I can only see four on most of the released artwork.