It's quite nice. As far as critique goes, I see that you make the wing out of straight lines and kinks instead of being smoothly blended. That makes more sense for a stealth fighter, but I'm not sure if that's how it was actually done. In his own words, Raymer says in the first E-mail that "we kept the strake running smoothly all the way to the nose, like in my original design". I imagine that was done to keep aerodynamics reasonably similar to the original design.
Also, I may have oversimplified the nozzle design on my drawing. I'm wonder if the real thing would have looked more like the nozzles on the F-15 S/MTD, just tilted to the side? That may be difficult to depict, however.
Indeed, I would think that a low-observable gray paint scheme would be appropriate.